Letter+to+Principal

ok...i guess this is the best.i edited the letter by putting the venue and i edited the form below. cos she can CHOOSE whether she wants to let us have the exhibit or not. she may or may not allow us to...so i edited it. but i tink she will allow us to hold the exhibition...but nvm. i'll just edit it.i print? then i'll give mrs j to pass to the principal~heidi

Here is a copy that I have edited, if you don't like it, just revert back to the original one. It is below. Thanks, Kang Hui Dear Mrs. Celine Ng, We are Jina Lim, Heidi Ngo, Natalie Chiu, Teow Kang Hui, Ang Bijou and Melissa Tang. We are from the P5 GEP classes, 5 Resilient and 5 Victorious. We are doing a project on Community Problem Solving, in short CmPS. Our group name is R.A.G.G. which stands for Rosyth All Girls Group. The problem that we have chosen is about the birds in the school canteen. If you recall, we once interviewed you about the problems you thought that the school was facing. These birds are very unhygienic as they fly all over the place. By doing this, they might contract diseases and if they continue to roost in the canteen, they might spread these diseases to the students. The birds are causing many problems. We have decided to tackle this problem by dealing with the root problem – the students. Educating the students is the best way to deal with the problem. Therefore, we were planning to hold an exhibition in the 8th week for our Bird Buster Campaign. We will be putting up posters around the school, and allow the students the play our specially designed games. Hopefully, this will increase their awareness about this problem. We would like to hold the exhibition at the 1st floor where the different boards for each subjects are. We would greatly appreciate it if you grant us permission to hold the exhibition. This will definitely help us with our project. If you have any more queries, do not hesitate to look for us to clarify your doubts. Thank you. Regards, R.A.G.G. I, Mrs. Celine Ng, Principal of Rosyth School, allow / do not allow the team RAGG, to organise the Bird Buster week in the 8th week of Term 4 at the venue requested. Signature: __ b __ Date: __ b __

Dear Mrs. Celine Ng, The three of us, Jina Lim, Heidi Ngo and Natalie Chiu are representing our group of six people, the three of us and Teow Kang Hui, Ang Bijou and Melissa Tang. We are from the P5 GEP classes, 5 Resilient and 5 Victorious. We are doing a project on Community Problem Solving, in short CmPS. Our group name is RAGG which stands for Rosyth All Girls Group. The problem that we have chosen is about the birds in the school canteen. We once interviewed you about the problems you think the school is facing, which is part f CmPS. We would like to hold an exhibition in the _ __week for our Bird Buster Campaign. We feel that educating the students and at the same time letting them have fun is the best way to deal with the problem. Thus, we would greatly appreciate it if you could allow us to hold the exhibition. If possible, we would like to have the exhibition on the first floor where the different boards for each subject are.__ Thank you, RAGG

I, Mrs. Celine Ng, Principal of Rosyth School, allows the team RAGG to hold their exhibition in the (dunno wat) week. Signed: Date:

yo peepz! that letter was done by jina and i. for some reason it cnt save the line. there should be long line after the "RAGG" part, then a short line for the principal to sign her signature at the bottom after the "dunno wat week". but when wwe print out, then it should show. so, do you tink this letter will do? if u wanna edit, pls dn edit on the letter, just post ur comments and edit this page. nat, u hv to edit it. cos the report said tt we three, u, me and jina did the letter.~heidi

hey. ok, i edited a bit. i think it's fine, just needs a bit of elaboration [which i dunno how to do]. i put in the line too, //i deserve some credit here!!!!// but whatever. do we just print this and ask Mrs Ng or do we have to get Mrs Jeya's approval first? ~ nat hey everyone, ok, this is just my thoughts, but shouldn't you guys change the font? - Bijou nvm lah.~heidi I have edited the thing...veri little onli. but hu carez cuz oredy printed out final copy liao~Jina